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Supernovas. by ~xRazor-Sharpx:iconxRazor-Sharpx:

Categories Literature > Poetry > General Poetry > Open


Dear X,


i. sometimes, when I see your name on my cell phone screen,
                      I smile.
                                other times, I just
                                              cry.

                (I usually can't tell which one of us
                                      I'm crying for.)



ii.     you've always been like glass. probably the broken kind.
               always so smooth and shining like
                                     the   most   radiant   star
             too bad someone let you fall to the ground
                     and    s    h   a   t   t   e   r .

              (then again some of the most
                                  beautiful things are broken)
                              



iii.    when I think of you,            I think of rockets and stars
                      and the way the moon shined on the lake
       sometimes I wake myself up at the sight of you
             but your face is so beautifully   t   r  a  g  i  c

                                    I simply can't look away



iv.      sometimes I remember all the midnight phonecalls
                       and the way your hushed voice sounded
             as I talked to you next to my window, bathed in
               m  o  o  n  l  i  g  h  t  .      those were some
                         of the most beautiful nights of my life.




v.       sometimes I wish I could hold your hand in the dark again,
                          with your sweatshirt wrapped around us
            to keep us warm.     
                             (I never would have guessed  
                               you were what made me cold in the first place.)




vi.      once in a while, I wished you could see voices.
                                      I pictured your voice as a supernova
                -so beautifully tragic and devastating and destructive
                                   it could
                        blow   the    whole    world
                                 a  w  a  y
©2009-2010 ~xRazor-Sharpx
:iconxrazor-sharpx:

Author's Comments

I've been in a kind of funky mood lately. I hope it goes away.

I also hope you're all well. Happy Friday.

:bug:

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*Miss-Deathwish Feb 15, 2009, 6:20:08 AM
This is absolutely stunning.

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keep your head above this water.
:iconxrazor-sharpx:
~xRazor-Sharpx Feb 15, 2009, 12:21:59 PM
Thank you. Very much.

:bug:

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I t ' s n o t e v e n l i g h t o u t.
:iconp0laroids:
~p0laroids Feb 18, 2009, 3:01:22 PM
Oh my.
This is absolutely breathtaking.
:iconxrazor-sharpx:
~xRazor-Sharpx Feb 18, 2009, 5:42:51 PM
Thank you very much, love. :heart:

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I t ' s n o t e v e n l i g h t o u t.
:iconohsostarryeyed:
*ohsostarryeyed Mar 4, 2009, 12:28:16 PM
'you've always been like glass. probably the broken kind.'

something about that was brilliant.

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i like to
put haikus where they
don't belong.
:iconxrazor-sharpx:
~xRazor-Sharpx Mar 4, 2009, 12:58:23 PM
Thank you. Very much.

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I t ' s n o t e v e n l i g h t o u t.
:iconxrazor-sharpx:
~xRazor-Sharpx Apr 27, 2009, 3:05:32 PM
Thank you so much. :bug:

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I t ' s n o t e v e n l i g h t o u t.
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~live-along May 3, 2009, 12:12:20 AM
love love love it.woah..tears...
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